ext_47791 ([identity profile] ltcoljsheppard.livejournal.com) wrote on July 3rd, 2008 at 05:49 pm
This is great. I like all the different POV's, made me feel as though I was mingling through the crowd too and observing each pairing as they moved around each other. "with a soft pop"... awesome imagery, I can actually hear it.

Nicely done, Yappi! -- JS
 
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